Event+7

The streets of London, dark with their misty, filled the night with darkness. The only person visible miles away was Charlie. He had been walking down the same street for a bit over an hour now, and his feet had begun to get tired, but he had to keep walking. He had to stop Tom from accusing Star as a serial killer. Charlie had no idea if he had gotten lost, but his determination kept him moving forward. He knew that Star’s life could be ruined if he did not convince Tom otherwise. At last he came to a street that Tom had mentioned he lived in. He walked down it and noticed that all the houses had their lights turned off, even though it was 9 pm. He heard a tiny noise behind him and rapidly turned around. “Oh, it’s just an ugly rat” he told himself, even though he had been extremely scared by the noise. Charlie despised rats. Finally he reached what he thought to be Tom’s house. The gloomy appearance of the house sent a chill down his body. He prepared himself for the encounter, even though he had practiced what he was going to say on the way there over and over again. He took a step forward and steeped in front of the door.
 * //Scene 7- Gustavo Angulo//**

**//Scene 7- Gustavo Angulo (draft 2)//** The streets of London were misty that night. The only person visible miles away was Charlie. He had been walking down the same street for a bit over an hour now, and his feet had begun to get tired, but he had to keep walking. He had to stop Tom from accusing Star as a serial killer. Charlie had no idea if he had gotten lost, but his determination kept him moving forward. He knew that Star’s life could be ruined if he did not convince Tom otherwise. At last he came to a street that Tom had mentioned he lived in. He walked down it and noticed that all the houses had their lights turned off, even though it was 9 pm. He heard a tiny noise behind him and rapidly turned around. “Oh, it’s just an ugly rat” he told himself, though he had been extremely scared by the noise. Charlie despised rats. Finally he reached what he thought to be Tom’s house. The gloomy appearance of the house sent a chill down his body. The house seemed abandoned, and he began having second thoughts if this was Tom’s house. He prepared himself for the encounter, even though he had practiced what he was going to say on the way there over and over again. He took a step forward and steeped in front of the door.

**//Scene 7- Gustavo Angulo (draft 3)//** The streets of London were misty that night. The only person visible miles away was Charlie. He had been walking down the same street for a bit over an hour now, and his feet had begun to get tired, but he had to keep walking. He had to stop Tom from accusing Star as a serial killer. Charlie had no idea if he had gotten lost, but his determination kept him moving forward. He knew that Star’s life could be ruined if he did not convince Tom otherwise. At last he came to a street that Tom had mentioned he lived in. He walked down it and noticed that all the houses had their lights turned off, even though it was 9 pm. He heard a tiny noise behind him and rapidly turned around. “Oh, it’s just a bloody rat” he told himself, though he had been extremely scared by the noise. Charlie despised those dam rats. Finally he reached what he thought to be Tom’s house. The gloomy appearance of the house sent a chill down his body. The house seemed abandoned, and he began having second thoughts if this was Tom’s house. He rehearsed once again what he was going to say to tom, even though he had practiced what he was going to say on the way there over and over again. He looked like a bumbeling bamboon loony standing out there. He took a step forward and stepped in front of the door.

**//Scene 7- Gustavo Angulo (draft 4)//** The streets of London were misty that night. The only person visible miles away was Charlie. He had been walking down the same street for a bit over an hour now, and his feet had begun to get tired, but he had to keep walking. He had to stop Tom from accusing Star as a serial killer. Charlie was trying to find the street Tom was living in, and he had to find it quickly. He knew that Star’s life could be ruined if he did not talk to Tom. At last he came to a street that Tom had mentioned he lived in. He walked down it and noticed that all the houses had their lights turned off, even though it was 9 pm. He heard a tiny noise behind him and rapidly turned around. “Oh, it’s just a bloody rat” he told himself, though he had been extremely scared by the noise. Charlie despised those dam rats. Finally he reached what he thought to be Tom’s house. The gloomy appearance of the house sent a chill down his body. The house seemed abandoned, and he began having second thoughts if this was Tom’s house. He rehearsed once again what he was going to say to Tom, even though he had practiced what he was going to say on the way there over and over again. He looked like a loony talking to himself out there. He took a step forward and stepped in front of the door.

Gary Hartman Draft 1

As Charlie was walking towards the old, creepy and cement house that Tom lived in he was thinking about how to appologise to Tom. Acording to Charlie he was gonna go into Toms house apologize, Toms would forgive him and they would enjoy a nice and fansy dinner just around the corner from Charlies hosue. Charlie stopped at Toms door, he was debating whether he should do this or not so he thought what was best so Charlie swung open the door. Charlie was staring at a disturbing image, an image that made Charlie regret the fight with Tom even more. Charlie was looking at Toms lifeless body, hanging from the roof with a thick regular rope. Charlie was very disturbed, but was also very puzzled. Charlie had thought that Tom was the murderer but he was dead. Charlie looked at Toms body very carefully, he noticed that I had small bites on it. Charlie thought Tom had comited suecide, but the small bites didn't quite fit in with the Picture.

Gary Hartman Draft 2

Charlie opened the rusted and wooded door, not knowing that the second he opened that door his life would completely change. Charlie swung the door and stared at the room. His face has pallid. Charlie didn’t breath for a minute until his brain finally took in the image of his best friend Tom being hung by his neck from the ceiling of his house with a big brown rope. “ Oh my god, could it be that our argument at the factory made Tom so angry he committed suicide. That doesn't make sense that, Tom loved himself.” Charlie took a close look at Toms body he noticed that there were little red marks on Toms body they looked more like small bites, small hard bites.

Gary Hartman 3

Charlie opened the rusted and wooded door, not knowing that the second he opened that door his life would completely change. Charlie swung the door and looked into the room. His face turned pallid, drops of sweat running down his neck, and eyes wide open. Charlie’s hands were shaking, his face scrunched. Charlie didn’t breath for a minute until his brain finally took in the image of his best friend Tom being hung by his neck from the ceiling of his house with a big brown rope. Charlie was disgusted, Toms head was hanging down, blooding pouring from his mouth ran down his chest and made a small puddle of blood on the floor. Toms wasn’t wearing a shirt, Charlie could see scratch marks running down Toms chest. Charlie took a close look at Toms body he noticed that there were little red marks on Toms body they looked more like small bites, small hard bites. Charlie noticed that the floor was dirty which was awkward because Tom was a neat freak. Charlie looked down and found Toms eyes on the ground witch wasn't a big surprise because he had noticed that Toms eyes were missing as soon as he saw his body. Charlie ran outside and went

Gary Hartman draft 4

Charlie opened the rusted and wooded door, not knowing that the second he opened that door his life would completely change. Charlie swung the door and looked into the room. His face turned pallid, drops of sweat running down his neck, and eyes wide open. Charlie’s hands were shaking, his face scrunched. Charlie didn’t breath for a minute until his brain finally took in the image of his best friend Tom being hung by his neck from the ceiling of his house with a big brown rope. Charlie was disgusted, Toms head was hanging down, blooding pouring from his mouth ran down his chest and made a small puddle of blood on the floor. Toms wasn’t wearing a shirt, Charlie could see scratch marks running down Toms chest. Charlie took a close look at Toms body he noticed that there were little red marks on Toms body they looked more like small bites, small hard bites. Charlie noticed that the floor was dirty which was awkward because Tom was a neat freak. Charlie could smell a perfume, which puzzled Charlie because it was a perfume for a woman, but Charlie also recognized the perfume but couldn't remember were he had smelled it before. Charlie could feel and hear the wind blowing through the house, it sounded as if the wind was coming from the back door, which Tom never used because he didn’t like to go into his back yard. Charlie looked down and found Toms eyes on the ground witch wasn't a big surprise because he had noticed that Toms eyes were missing as soon as he saw his body. There were a lot of things that were awkward and didn’t make sense, but Charlie couldn't figure out who would do this or if Tom had done this to him self

Scene 7- Sidney Velado

English Sidney Velado Steampunk Story November 23, 2010

Suddenly Charlie heard a creak at the door and there stood Star. Charlie stared at her horrified of what he just saw. But she didn’t look scared she actually looked… relieved. “He just went crazy, It was a matter of time if you ask me” Charlie wondered if his friend really had committed suicide. He wondered “Why would he do it, I should have come to say sorry before…” Charlie thought, his hand started shaking, out of his control. “Let’s just go home, he really was just a crazy fool after all,” Star said, Charlie crumbled to his knees. Charlie’s blue eyes watered, tainted red. “Why!?” Who would do this? Why?! Suddenly Charlie looked up to see Star’s reaction. She looked like she was about to explode in a giggle. “ I just had to Charlie, JAJAJA, he just knew waaay too much MUAHAHA. AHAHAHAH. He was really smart after all not just the crazy old fool

Draft 2

Charlie started shaking, his hand betraying him. His eyes glistened with tears, his crystal blue eyes tainted red. "WHY!" Charlie's clenched his fist. "Who would do this!" Charlie buried his head in his hands. A gush of blood sprang into his face. He punched the wall declaring "I should've come and said i was sorry..." Charlie let go of his rage and crumbled to his knees. Charlie's cry pierced the silent night. Then he heard a creak at the door, Charlie turned to the door. His face scrunched and looking like a rabbid bulldog. His face eased with the what he was seeing. Charlie stared at the figure of Star a slim and beautiful figure shining in the doorway with the moonlight. Star didn't even look at Tom's body she just said "Look like he really was a crazy old fool" Charlie started getting angry "How can you be so calm? Who could ever do this?" Star giggled "I just had to charlie he knew too much" "Hahahhaha! He really wasn't such an idiot"

"You couldn't" cried Charlie. "You conniving little snake"

"Now,now Charlie lets not get ahead of ourselves you know too much too,you know what that means..." Star grinned

"No, you wouldn't..." Charlie was cut off with the horrible sight of starts true form.

Star opened her mouth only to reveal disgusting rotting rat-like teeth.She smile, Charlie caught a flicker of a thick, pink tail. When suddenly Star opened her mouth wider and wider. All Charlie could see was the dozens of shadows coming out of her mouth. Charlie screamed louder and louder but his cries of fear were drowned by the rats.