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Changes:

1. Ronald and Albert need more personality. 2. Add more details for setting. 3. The "voice" of the characters - word choice, slang etc. - needs to fit the setting. 4. Add a conflict.

Students, Remember that the middle events must have conflict and obstacles to resolving the conflict. Keep it simple though. Don't create "big" events that would require a chapter to write! Remember to focus of their personalities: greed for Ronald, and his desire to keep Albert a puppet.

State your name and list your ideas for plot events below:

1 Ronald and Albert meet in the Victorian age era. Ronald is at his friend’s wills apartment that is showing him his latest inventions. Ronald sees Albert out of place (since Albert isn’t an invention) asks about him and keeps him. (chesca and Leia)

2. Albert reveals the spell: He can make Ronald rich and he will become human through the love of the audience, but he cautions Ronald that he must remain generous and kind. (juli + aitana)

3. They hold shows and Albert becomes more human as the audience loves him. (Sarah + sarah)

4. Ronald (now rich and famous) notices that Albert is becoming more human. He wants to stop the process to gain more money, so he locks Albert in a box when he isn’t preforming. (Joseph + eugenia)

5. Ronald refuses to give money to a homeless man on the way home from a successful show where he made a lot of money. Albert tells Ronald that big consequences will happen if he doesn’t change his attitude. Ronald in his head thinks that if he keeps Albert trapped, Albert will be his magical puppet forever so he can be the richest man in the world (Orlando + rafa)

6. . Backstage after the show, Ronald is ready to collect the money when he hears Albert telling him “Ronald, we could have both been successful. If you had only been kind and generous like I asked.” Ronald is confused, because Albert is in the box, but then the box explodes and when Albert touches Ronald they both start changing. Ronald becomes a puppet. Albert becomes human. (saunon + santiago)

7. Albert takes Ronald back to Will's place. Ronald meets a stranger and knows what he must do..... (Noah and roberto) noah's part -Santiago