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**First Drafts** Christopher had decided to kill himself. It was just too much everything he had gone through. From Rose getting killed to his mother dying to Livingston becoming evil and demon-like. Livingston entered Christopher’s house just to see Christopher pointing a knife at his neck. Christopher killed himself and suddenly Livingston felt something within him rising away, just like his soul was being taken away by a ghostly and mystic force. He felt as if his heart was being ripped away from his insides and all that energy was leaving behind was flesh and bones. After a while of the supernatural feeling, Livingston knew what was happening, the demon that was so uncannily trapping all the good inside him was starting to disappear. Guilt and sorrow were the only things left behind. **(Diana) **

Livingston started to realize that his brother had suicide himself for all his fault. He had nothing else to remember him, than the brother he had, that had passed the good times, helped him throughout his life, and had abandoned him and his mother, but for a good cause. He had made his life miserable, but at the end karma came and did the same thing to him. He couldn’t go back in time to change all the bad thing he had done, and start form zero. Livingston started to get flashbacks, from all the good times he had with Christopher, which made him have more guilt. Nothing could come out from his mouth. His heart had all hard, with lot of pain, making him feel a lot worse. He knew that his life was going to get even worse throughout his life, killing himself wouldn’t make it better, he would die with guilt, and it would never go away. Making him self a priest was the only way to make some guilt go away, waiting to god forgive him would make his life stronger, he would have the ability to go on his life, and have Christopher be with him, and giving him support. (Arianna)

**Second Drafts** Christopher had decided to kill himself. It was already too much everything he had gone through: from Rose getting killed to his mother dying to Livingston becoming evil and demon-like. Livingston entered Christopher’s house just in time to see Christopher pointing a knife at his neck. Christopher killed himself and suddenly Livingston felt something within him rising up and away, just like his soul was being taken away by a ghostly and mystic force. He felt as if his heart was being ripped away from his insides and all that energy was leaving behind was flesh and bones. After a while of the supernatural feeling, Livingston knew what was happening, the demon that was so uncannily trapping all the good inside him was starting to disappear. Guilt and sorrow were the only things left behind. (Diana)

Livingston started to realize that his brother had committed suicide because of him. He had no more memories to remember him, only what a great brother he had, how they passed wonderful times together, how he helped him throughout his life, and when he had abandoned him and his mother. He had caused his own life to become miserable, but at the end karma acted and did the same thing to him. He couldn’t go back in time to change all the bad thing he had done and start form zero. Livingston started to get flashbacks from all the good times he had with Christopher, which made him feel more guilt. No words could come out from his mouth. His heart had gone all hard, with a lot of pain, making him feel a lot worse. He knew that his life was going to get even worse but killing himself wouldn’t make it better. He would die with all of the guilt, and it would never go away. Becoming a priest was the only way to make some guilt away go. Waiting and working for God to forgive him would make his life stronger and he would gain the ability to go on with his life and to have Christopher be with him, giving him support. (Arianna)

**Third Drafts** Christopher had decided to kill himself. It was already too much everything he had gone through: from Rose getting killed to his mother dying to Livingston becoming evil and demon-like. Livingston entered Christopher’s house just in time to see Christopher pointing a knife at his neck. "Christopher, please don't do this! You will regret it later! Don't do it, you'll realize how beautiful life is, please don't make your own end!" Livingston cried, trying to convince Christopher to drop the knife from his neck. "I have to do it. It's too much pain and anger I have towards you." Christopher whispered in a husky voice. Livingston realized he couldn't do anything about it and he ran away before he could see his own brother die. As soon as Livingston closed the door, Christopher put the knife down. He was going to let Livingston live with the same pain that he caused himself and their mother when he left them alone, only this time Livingston would hopefully believe his brother was dead. As Livingston ran away, he felt something within him rising up and away, just like his soul was being taken away by a ghostly and mystic force. He felt as if his heart was being ripped away from his insides and all that energy was leaving behind was flesh and bones. After a while of the supernatural feeling, Livingston knew what was happening, the demon that was so uncannily trapping all the good inside him was starting to vanish. Guilt and sorrow were the only things left behind. Livingston knew what this meant, Christopher hadn’t killed himself. He wasn’t completely sure, but neither was he going to check on Livingston. He started to slow his pace as he imagined how he would live now with zero members of his family. (Diana)

Livingston started to realize that his brother had committed suicide because of him. He had no more memories to remember him, only what a great brother he had, how they passed wonderful times together, how he helped him throughout his life, and when he had abandoned him and his mother. He had caused his own life to become miserable, but at the end karma acted and did the same thing to him. He couldn’t go back in time to change all the bad thing he had done and start form zero. Livingston started to get flashbacks from all the good times he had with Christopher, which made him feel more guilt. No words could come out from his mouth except "I'm sorry, "I'm sorry Christopher, I'm sorry for everything," he shouted, waiting for his brother to respond, but Christopher was still on the floor, not moving at all. Livingston's words would make any help. His heart had gone all hard, with a lot of pain, making him feel a lot worse. He knew that his life was going to get even worse but killing himself wouldn’t make it better. He would die with all of the guilt, and it would never go away. Becoming a priest was the only way to make some guilt away go. Waiting and working for God to forgive him would make his life stronger and he would gain the ability to go on with his life and to have Christopher be with him, giving him suppor t. (Arianna)

**Fourth Drafts** Christopher had decided to kill himself. It was all too much everything he had gone through in his life: from Rose getting killed to his mother dying to Livingston becoming evil and demon-like. Livingston entered Christopher’s house just in time to see Christopher pointing a knife at his neck. <span style="font: normal normal normal 13px/19px Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">"Christopher, please don't do this! You will regret it later! Don't do it, you'll realize how beautiful life is, please don't make your own end!" Livingston weeped, trying to convince Christopher to drop the knife from his neck. <span style="font: normal normal normal 13px/19px Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">"I have to do it. It's too much pain and anger I have towards you." Christopher whispered in a husky voice. Livingston realized he couldn't do anything about it and he ran away before he could see his own brother die. <span style="font: normal normal normal 13px/19px Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">As soon as Livingston closed the door, Christopher put the knife down. He was going to let Livingston live with the same pain that he caused himself and their mother when he left them alone, only this time Livingston would hopefully believe his brother was dead. <span style="font: normal normal normal 13px/19px Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">As Livingston ran away, he felt something within him rising up and away, like his soul was being taken away by a ghostly and mystic force. He felt as if his heart was being ripped away from his insides and all that energy was leaving behind was flesh and bones. After a while of that supernatural feeling, Livingston knew what was happening; the demon that was so uncannily trapping all the good inside him was starting to vanish. Guilt and sorrow were the only things left behind. Livingston knew what this meant, Christopher hadn’t killed himself. He wasn’t completely sure, but neither was he going to check on Livingston. He began to slow his pace as he started to meditate how he would live now with no members of his family supporting him through the good and the bad times and backing him up when he most needed them. <span style="color: #ff0000; font: normal normal normal 13px/19px Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">(Diana)

Livingston started to realize that his brother had committed suicide because of his fault. He had no more memories to remember him, only what a great brother he had, how they passed wonderful times together, how he helped him throughout his life, and when he had abandoned him and his mother. He had caused his own life to become miserable, but at the end karma acted to him and made his life awful, like he mad done to other people. He couldn’t go back in time to change all the bad thing he had done and start form zero, only a time machine would be the only possibility to fix what he had done. Livingston started to get flashbacks from all the good times he had with Christopher, which made him feel more guilt. No words could come out from his mouth except "I'm sorry, I'm sorry Christopher, I'm sorry for everything," he whispered just when he kneeled down next to his dead brother, waiting for him to respond, but Christopher was still on the floor, not moving at all. Livingston's words would make any help, Christopher was already dead and that wouldn’t change. Livingston's heart had gone all hard, with a lot of pain, making him feel a lot worse. He knew that his life was going to get even worse but killing himself wouldn’t make it better. He would die with all of the guilt, and it would never go away. Becoming a priest was the only way to make some guilt away go. Waiting and working for God to forgive him would make his life stronger and he would gain the ability to go on with his life and to have Christopher be with him, giving him support. Knowing that he would always have someone who would love him would make him stronger in life, and would help him change to be a better person. (Arianna)