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And now the extraordinary Ronald and his puppet Albert! Thank you thank you, and now what you've all been waiting for Albert! hello everyone my names Albert. You will do everything I tell you to,first tell everyone you know to come and see this show over and over again and second give Ronald all the money and valuables you have with you. Those fools they fall right into the trap right Albert? Yes they do but then again who doesn't? I suppose you're right how many money did we get today? said Ronald100 pounds. If you keep it up I'll be able to get you all fixed up wouldn't you like that? No I don't have a problem with being the way I am after all I won't always stay like this.. What was that Albert ? Nothing just thinking. That's odd my hands seem wrinkled,I must be so tired I'm seeing things but my back really does feel stiff i must go to the doctor first thing tomorrow. It's nothing Ronald I'm sure that won't be a problem for long... Doctor I've been experiencing some problems I seem to have a back problem it's as stiff as a plank of wood,I couldn't get any sleep last night. Have you been working too hard again? Last time you came it was due to those heavy loads you were carrying to uild a new puppet stage am I right? Yes but now it's different i' m working at the theatre now so I haven't been doing much work lately I mostly just sit there and entertain. Well then I don't see the cause just try not to do much and maybe give that show of yours a break ,a few days won't kill you right last I've heard you show has become more popular. Tell me what's your secret to success ? There's no secret I suppose I'm just a very talented entertainer ,good day. Albert i have some news the doctor said I should take a few days off what do you think? That old man, he doesn't know what he's doing I saw we keep doing the show after all that is what you want right? Yes you're right we should keep going money won't fall out of the sky. =====

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Albert i don't think I'll be able to do the show tonight I'm not feeling well. Ronald don't get stressed just be there for the introduction and i'll take care of the rest. Thanks albert you're the best. And now the extraordinary Ronald and his puppet Albert! Thank you thank you my name is Ronald and i will be your entertainer tonight .And now what you've all been waiting for,Albert the puppet! Hello everyone my names Albert. How are you all doing tonight?. I'm sorry i had to leave I don't know what happened I was fine before the show and then suddenly I felt like passing out. Don't worry I am sure that won't be a problem for long said Albert .That's odd I thought my hands seem wrinkled,I must be so tired I'm seeing things but my back really does feel stiff i must go to the doctor first thing tomorrow and see what's the matter.=====

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Doctor Reid how have you been? Oh Ronald hello I've been fine thank you but how have you been by the looks of it not so good otherwise you wouldn't be here. Well Doctor I've experiencing some problems I seem to have a back ache, it's as stiff as a plank of wood. Oh I see Have you been working too hard again Ronald? Said Dr Reid. Last time you came it was due to those heavy loads you were carrying to build a new puppet stage;But I've heard your show has become popular and you now perform at the theatre so that can't be it right? Right I agreed.=====

Sarah draft 3 ">I was making lots of money and life seemed to get better with time. I increased the number of shows and Albert was becoming a star, sometimes I wondered if I was even necessary. Unfortunately everything has a price and mine seemed to be pain, a terrible radiating pain that was invading every single part of my body. “Albert I am starting to feel stiffness in my hands and my legs are weak” “I’m sure its nothing,” said Albert not fully convinced I nodded and agreed for the time being but I knew it had to be something, I just didn’t know what. The next couple of performances drained me out; I could barely walk, my speech seemed forced and I had to drag myself to and from the stage. “Enough” I said to myself and decided to go to the doctor. He came up with a couple of theories but nothing conclusive. I seemed fine but I wasn’t. “I just don’t know” the doctor said frankly. I felt even worse because if a doctor couldn’t figure it out then who could?

Sarah final draft

I was making lots of money and life seemed to get better with time. I increased the number of shows and Albert was becoming a star, sometimes I wondered if I was even necessary. My surroundings changed drastically as Albert predicted. I went from living in a one room drab and depressive "apartment" to a bright and spacious three bedroom house, every one in the slums started making up their own little puppet show with the hope of succeeding like me. Unfortunately everything has a price and mine seemed to be pain, a terrible radiating pain that was invading every single part of my body. “Albert I am starting to feel stiffness in my hands and my legs are weak” “I’m sure its nothing,” said Albert not fully convinced Why was Albert's answer so unsettling?Does he know something I don't? I realized I had dozed off into deep thought when Albert came before me and started making hand movements to get my attention. "Hello are you listening? I'm sure it's nothing trust me" said Albert I nodded with difficulty mostly due to the pain I was enduring but there was also something else bothering me right now I feel like I can't trust anyone, especially a puppet. The next couple of performances drained me out; I could barely walk, my speech seemed forced and I had to drag myself to and from the stage. “Enough” I said to myself and decided to go to the doctor. Doctor Reid the best physician in England is a young,tall,blond haired man with deep blue eyes that reminded me of my old self.He has to know what's the matter I reassured myself as I walked into his office. "Good morning what can I do for you?" he said with a deep yet sophisticated voice. "Well I've been experiencing some stiffness throughout my body especially around my back" "Hmm stiffness you say have you been working to hard?" " well if you consider being the best puppeteer in town hard work then yes" " Oh I see sorry about that Mr puppeteer,lets take a look."He came up with a couple of theories but nothing conclusive. I seemed fine but I wasn’t. “I just don’t know” the doctor said frankly. I put on my waist coat and top hat and with a thank you set out on my way home.I felt even worse because if a doctor couldn’t figure it out then who could?

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Doctor Reid told me I just needed some rest and to take a break from the puppet shows so I headed home. When I got back I saw Albert, looking better than ever. I thought maybe it was just my imagination and he probably only looked better to me because I looked worn out in comparison since I was so exhausted. I knew it was just because I was working to hard so I headed to my room to get ready to sleep saying to Albert "I might not be able to do the show for a few days. The doctor said i needed to take a break and get some rest. Goodnight Albert!". But before I took two steps Albert shouted out. He said "don't listen to that old fool he doesn't know what he's saying! I thought you wanted to become rich!" I said to him "Well I do but I don't want to risk my health. Look at me it's like I haven't slept in weeks! I feel like an old man." But Albert quickly replied saying "What are you talking about you look perfectly as good as the day I met you! If not better! That old man doesn't know what he's saying you just need a good nights sleep. No need to cancel any shows". "O.K." I said thinking maybe it all just is in my head I mean I really couldn't look that bad Albert was probably right. So I went off to my bed but not before catching a glimpse of myself in the mirror in the hallway. I thought I saw what looked like a worn out old wrinkled face but I knew it was just my imagination so I ignored it, though I still felt uneasy, and went to sleep.