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My dream is going to become true, I only need to make this show and the governor's daughter, Charlotte will be my wife because I will take her backstage and ask her to marry me while she is hypnotized. This is the perfect plan. I feel a little nervous but I can manage this. I have noticed that I am becoming very old and wrinkly while my puppet Albert becomes new and shiny. Maybe Albert is...

"Hey Ronald what are you doing? It's show time!" said Albert interrupting my thinking. Well, it is show time so I'm going to get started . I opened the curtains and I made the show. I did a very well job hypnotizing everyone including Charlotte. The show ended and my heart was beating as fast as a drum. I saw Charlotte getting up to come here but the I heard a voice behind me saying in a really creepy voice,

"Don't get so exited Ronald..."

-Roberto Luconi 2nd draft

"This is great, my show is about to start and I bet I'm going to hit the jackpot in this one!" I thought to myself. When I stepped on that dusty wooden floor the first thing I noticed was the governors daughter, Charlotte. "Ok, ok, keep your calm Ronald, you can do this, breathe in, breath out, it's just like a normal show, it's gonna be cool." I thought. With the crowd cheering and Charlotte sitting there surrounded by guards, waiting, Albert whispered to me, "Ok, there she is, now the only thing we have to do is hypnotize her." I then felt a deep feeling of mischief, and treachery. I slowly nodded my head and started the "show." Suddenly everyone fell asleep, including the governor's daughter. Suddenly, Charlotte picked up her head and got up from her seat in a snap. She then started walking towards us, only weirdly like if she was a controlled puppet. When she finally was right in front of me, I took that moment to kneel down and ask her if she wanted to be my wife. She only nodded her head slowly and stood there. I put the ring on my hand and showed it to her. Without a reaction, she looked at me, well not really at me, almost like through me. I grabbed her hand and placed the ring around her finger. Orlando Urroz