4th+event

Joseph Draft 1

The next day, after getting a good rest, my back didn't feel any better. I went to the theater as usual, trying and succeeding to please the giant audience. As I was preforming, I saw through the window a carriage pull up on the sidewalk. A lady stepped out, her two initials stitched on her robe in gold: C.W. Charlotte Walker. She was the governor's daughter, a very wealthy and arrogant man, almost like the Queen herself. When I finished the show, i quickly went backstage with the puppet. "Albert, I want to marry Charlotte Walker." "What?" He replied, "I want to marry Charlotte Walker, but I'm not sure if I could. I mean, look at me! How did I get this ugly? I used to be handsome and clean, but not anymore.... "Oh that's nonsense! You still look as amazing as ever! nothing has changed......." Or so he wanted me to think. "Thank you, Albert. I won't let my self esteem go any lower. I shall ask her to go backstage with me tomorow, and we can have some tea together. The puppet grinned behind my back.

 Joseph Draft 2

 The next day, after getting a good rest, my back didn't feel any better at all. At least there was one good news: Our puppet anniversary was coming up soon. I went to the theater, as usual, trying and succeeding to please the giant audience. As I was preforming, I saw through the window a carriage pull up on the sidewalk. A lady stepped out, her two initials stitched on her robe in gold: C.W. Charlotte Walker. She was the governor's daughter, a very wealthy and arrogant man, almost like the Queen herself. Everyone in town knew about the famous Charlotte Walker. She was well known for criticizing important events. She was like an extra judge. When I finished the show, I quickly went backstage with the puppet. "Albert, I want to marry Charlotte Walker." "What?" He replied, "I want to marry Charlotte Walker, but I'm not sure if I could. I mean, look at me! How did I get this ugly? I used to be handsome and clean, but not anymore.... " I sobbed, "Oh that's nonsense! You still look as amazing as ever! nothing has changed......." Or so he wanted me to think. "Thank you, Albert. I won't let my self - esteem go any lower. I shall ask her to go backstage with me tomorrow, and we can have some tea together. The puppet grinned behind my back, except I could see him through the reflection of the window.

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As I walk towards the town hall, someone catches my sight. I see this young beautiful woman. She was perfect. Her pale skin, brown curly hair, and blue eyes were what made all men in town crazy. Then right away I knew she shall be mine. As I stare at that beauty, Albert realizes my strange look. ===== “what’s wrong with you?"  “well see that beautiful woman right over there?” I pointed at the woman so that Albert could see her  “wow she is beautiful indeed” he exclaimed  “Well I shall marry her”  “aand who is she?” Albert asked  “the governor’s daughter”  As I headed home I glance at her with despair thinking about my looks. Apparently my looks have changed from being a handsome man to this. A normal guy. What will she think of me? I look back at Albert.  “I’m not sure if she would like me”  “Come on Ronald you still have your good looks I bet you that when you face her for the first time, she will fall in love you’ll see”  “Are you sure?”  “Yeah and remember you’re rich and a successful man! Which girl wouldn’t resist to that!?”  “you’re right! I am a successful and rich man with that I”m unstoppable! But how should I talk to her?”  “write an invitation for her to come to our show!” “Good idea!” When I got home, I ran as fast as I could towards the paper and pen. I grab the pen and start writing “You’re cordially invited to my puppet show” and signed it off with a sincerely Ronald.